Thank you for submitting your attempt at this assessment. Areas of improvement are noted; however, a bit more work is needed. As stated, you did a very nice job summarizing an interview focused on this current issue at the healthcare organization. I made some recommendations on how some criterion might achieve a higher performance score. You have the potential to be an excellent writer. Please review the comment within the attached graded paper and let me know if you have any questions. Please review my in-text comments throughout your graded assignment submission for specific areas with your paper requiring additional clarification, detail, supportive evidence, and/or revision. If you choose to resubmit, please HIGHLIGHT the revisions. I look forward to reading more of your work. – Dr. Larson

-Angela Candidi Larson

Scoring Guide

Competency 2

Explain how interdisciplinary collaboration can be used to achieve desired patient and systems outcomes.

Criterion

Summarize an interview focused on past or current issues at a health care organization.

Your Result:
BASIC

Discusses an interview, but the focus of the interview, the issues addressed, or the specifics of health care organizational context are unclear or missing.

Faculty Comments:This section was a bit unclear. I did not find a full summary of the interview that gave a complete discussion of strategies supported by citations in the literature. This is needed for a higher performance score. What does the literature say? Please review my in-text comments throughout your graded assignment submission for specific areas with your paper requiring additional clarification, detail, supportive evidence, and/or revision.

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Criterion

Describe collaborative approaches from the literature that could be relevant in establishing or improving an interdisciplinary team to address an organizational issue.

Your Result:
BASIC

Identifies collaborative approaches from the literature but the relevance to establishing or improving an interdisciplinary team to address an organizational issue is unclear or insufficiently explained.

Faculty Comments:While you identified one possible approach, limited evidence exists to support a full enough description of collaborative approaches, supported by citations from the literature, that supported relevancy to the interdisciplinary team to address this organizational issue. This is needed for a higher performance score. Please review my in-text comments throughout your graded assignment submission for specific areas with your paper requiring additional clarification, detail, supportive evidence, and/or revision.

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Competency 3

Describe ways to incorporate evidence-based practice within an interdisciplinary team.

Criterion

Identify an issue from an interview for which an evidence-based interdisciplinary approach would be appropriate.

Your Result:
BASIC

Identifies an issue with an unclear connection to the interview or for which an evidence-based interdisciplinary approach seems inappropriate.

Faculty Comments:The issue you identified lacked clarity. I did not understand the connection of this issue to the interview. I also did not find any evidence to show that the multi-disciplinary approach was indeed evidenced based. What does the literature say? This is needed for a higher performance score. Please review my in-text comments throughout your graded assignment submission for specific areas with your paper requiring additional clarification, detail, supportive evidence, and/or revision.

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Competency 4

Explain how change management theories and leadership strategies can enable interdisciplinary teams to achieve specific organizational goals.

Criterion

Describe potential change theories and leadership strategies that could help develop an interdisciplinary solution to an organizational issue.

Your Result:
BASIC

Identifies change theories and leadership strategies that are unclear, incomplete, or irrelevant to developing an interdisciplinary solution to an organizational issue.

Faculty Comments:There is a lack of evidence to support a substantial description of both a change theory and a leadership strategy, supported by citations in the literature that fully develop an interdisciplinary solution to this issue. What does the literature say? Please take a look at my in-text comments throughout your graded assignment submission for specific areas with your paper needing additional clarification, detail, supporting evidence, and/or revision.

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Competency 5

Apply professional, scholarly, evidence-based communication strategies to impact patient, interdisciplinary team, and systems outcomes.

Criterion

Organize content so ideas flow logically with smooth transitions; contains few errors in grammar/punctuation, word choice, and spelling.

Your Result:
PROFICIENT

Organizes content so ideas flow logically with smooth transitions; contains few errors in grammar/punctuation, word choice, and spelling.

Faculty Comments:Your writing was clear and logical. There were some errors in grammar, punctuation, and spelling. For a higher performance score, I hope you will use the Academic writer website: https://academicwriter-apa-org.library.capella.edu/ to help you with this. You have the potential to be an excellent writer. You may also wish to check out the learner success lab for additional writing resources: https://campus.capella.edu/school-of-nursing-and-health-sciences/nhs-learner-success-lab. Please review my in-text comments throughout your graded assignment submission for specific areas with your paper requiring additional clarification, detail, supportive evidence, and/or revision. Grammarly may also be a helpful tool to assist you with proper grammar and spelling.

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Criterion

Apply APA formatting to in-text citations and references exhibiting nearly flawless adherence to APA format.

Your Result:
BASIC

Applies APA formatting to in-text citations, headings and references incorrectly and/or inconsistently, detracting noticeable from the content. Inconsistently uses headings, quotes and/or paraphrasing.

Faculty Comments:There were many inconsistencies in the APA formatting regarding in-text citations and your reference list. This decreased clarity. Remember that when you quote the exact words of an author, quotation marks and a page number or paragraph number need to be in the in-text citation. I recommend you review how to paraphrase, as this is considered a more scholarly way to write. This site may be of help to you: https://campus.capella.edu/web/writing-center/sources-and-evidence/quoting. You may also wish to check out the learner success lab for additional writing resources:  https://campus.capella.edu/school-of-nursing-and-health-sciences/nhs-learner-success-lab. Please review my in-text comments throughout your graded assignment submission for specific areas with your paper requiring additional clarification, detail, supportive evidence, and/or revision.